Again, this is a snippet from my WIP entitled Illusions of Intimacy. Here the two lovers are facing mortal separation. This is a time travel fantasy romance. Their souls remain connected. But, chance reincarnation into another common world must occur for them to meet each other's physical forms again, so they may express their love.
Art credit: deviant art“Lynae, let them save you; I will find you again in another life, my love.” He collapsed to the ground at my feet.
I turned my head to have view of his face and reached out, grasping his hand. I felt someone apply salve, but my eyes never left his. Tears streamed, as I watched his body die. In his last breath his hand squeezed mine, and then his soul kissed me before it lifted away.
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20 comments:
Lovely post. I love the idea of souls kissing.
An emotionally powerful six.
It is really to early in the morning to cry!! Great emotionally packed six.
Wow. I love that his soul kissed her before it lifted away. Powerful snippet!
Yes, hand me the box of tissues because this six made me cry. Wonderful writing!
Beautiful and powerful. And this is such a great story idea!
How sad! Nicely conveyed emotion, though. Very powerful.
what an awesome death scene. Love the soul kissing, so beautifull.
Stunning six. Beautiful and sad.
Very powerful scene. Beautifully written.
Aww, how touching. :(
Count me in with the group. I, too, like the line about souls kissing.
Wow - sounds like a fab story! Great six :)
Awwww...Poignant.
Such a sad parting. :-(
Oh how sad! I am so glad they will find themselves again.
arghhh don't leave us here. What a scene! So heart felt, and sad :( fab six, though! Beautiful, and touching.
That's beautiful. Amazing idea, too.
Heartbreaking.
Such sorrow! Great six!
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