Here’s six from my fantasy erotic romance book Tears on a Tranquil Lake. In this scene, my mermaid heroine, Ciel, has just been given a welcoming gift by her merman lover, Meris--a magical black pearl pendant.
Its luster gleamed with green-violet iridescence against my skin.“It shines for you alone.” Gently pulling my hair out from under the cord and away from my breasts, his fingers passed over their upper curves.I felt connected to him, with no apprehensions. I brushed aside remaining strands from my chest and lay back upon the sand, displaying my breasts to him with the black pearl resting between.Meris traced a finger down one side of the cord to the pearl.
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31 comments:
Such a calm atmosphere. Beautiful images.
A wonderful excerpt leading up to (I'm sure) something big. I hope you'll share more of that scene next week.
great snippet! So calm and beautiful.
Love the snippet, Marsha! Will we get more next week? *wink*
~Sarah
www.sarahgrimm.com
Leaves me wondering where that finger will go next.
A beautiful scene. Hopefully next week you'll give us a peek at what happens next!
Her tranquilty is shown so well. Love how connected she is to him.
Evocative, and great imagery.
Nice and peaceful. Great job!
Oooo very interesting!! Great visuals!
xx
Angela
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Tres sensuous
That was all tender and sexy. I want to read more now.
Such sensual imagery!
It's amazing the image you can get from only six sentences!
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More please
So subtly sexy. I'm definitely intrigued to read more.
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Another great scene. Can't wait to read my copy. :)
Sexy and vivid.
Nicely sensual!
Very tender scene.
Sweet, tender, and sexy. Great six.
Great imagery, Marsha.
Loved the descriptions here. Great visuals.
And Meris sounds like a keeper!
Beautiful set-up, sexy yet serene. Very nice.
I want a jewel like that for myself, it sounds so neat.
That was beautifully written. The tension, the sensual feel.. I loved it all
I love all the snippets from this story!
awesome build up to what will come!
beautiful scene and nice build up! Nice six xxx
Beautiful six :)
great six! very romantic!
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