tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post9068178862211716038..comments2024-03-05T02:19:34.846-05:00Comments on Marsha A. Moore: Romantic Friday Writer_Up, Up & Away_The Kiss of LifeMarsha A. Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-79036187001810808632011-06-25T12:21:22.291-04:002011-06-25T12:21:22.291-04:00Oh wow that was hot hot hot yet under water! I lov...Oh wow that was hot hot hot yet under water! I love it :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-59691354014124094402011-06-18T09:51:15.160-04:002011-06-18T09:51:15.160-04:00Thanks for all the great comments and warm welcome...Thanks for all the great comments and warm welcomes to Romantic Friday Writers! I normally like to jump in during the day and respond to individuals, but had some minor emergencies pop up. <br /><br />Glad my piece gave a fun read!Marsha A. Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-67200485329435091652011-06-17T22:29:18.932-04:002011-06-17T22:29:18.932-04:00Hello Marsha.
Thanks for following my blog. I'...Hello Marsha.<br />Thanks for following my blog. I'm your newest follower too!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-91163952327576259932011-06-17T14:29:50.228-04:002011-06-17T14:29:50.228-04:00You had me hooked from the first. A difficult task...You had me hooked from the first. A difficult task for the writer. I loved the surprise of the kiss and the healing of her body as she experienced it. Well done.<br />Nancy<br /><a href="http://nrwilliams.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium</a>N. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-32177224917566814212011-06-17T09:56:51.806-04:002011-06-17T09:56:51.806-04:00I love the sensuality of this, and the merman them...I love the sensuality of this, and the merman theme.<br /><br />Wondering about that 'gator though - did he just evaporate or...? Is there no pain from where he grabbed her ?leg? Was there a feeling of release from the gator's jaws (did the merman kill the gator, or...?)Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-30187532589945297812011-06-17T09:26:15.898-04:002011-06-17T09:26:15.898-04:00Hi, and welcome to RFWs.
This is rather lovely, a...Hi, and welcome to RFWs.<br /><br />This is rather lovely, and a whole new take on the fantasy of mermen. Nicely written piece of impending death and initial embrace of letting go. Nice twist on Up Up & Away! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-16746265889929595292011-06-17T07:52:21.057-04:002011-06-17T07:52:21.057-04:00What an intriguing tale. I love tales of the "...What an intriguing tale. I love tales of the "supernatural" kind (in fact that is one of my favourite tv shows lately. A merman... great twist.Andy McDonaldhttp://fictionisanaddiction.blospot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-88182958100527888132011-06-17T06:30:21.766-04:002011-06-17T06:30:21.766-04:00Hello.
Quite the romantic piece.
A merman...now th...Hello.<br />Quite the romantic piece.<br />A merman...now there's a spin on things!<br />I like the intrigue at the end.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-6461166344831306262011-06-17T05:05:35.642-04:002011-06-17T05:05:35.642-04:00I really enjoyed your piece...wow...a merman! A gr...I really enjoyed your piece...wow...a merman! A great take on the theme, I like the conjuring of new beginnings.<br /><br />Love your book title too.Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.com