tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post7152574315707977834..comments2024-03-05T02:19:34.846-05:00Comments on Marsha A. Moore: Six Sentence Sunday - February 13thMarsha A. Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-58735916350442047172011-02-19T20:05:16.696-05:002011-02-19T20:05:16.696-05:00Give us more!Give us more!D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-84996366481035934432011-02-13T15:07:38.732-05:002011-02-13T15:07:38.732-05:00I do like the use of accent here. It makes her st...I do like the use of accent here. It makes her stand out. <br /><br />I would say make a noticable difference between e as in eh and e as in ee, but that's just my personal craziness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-82553583408639397212011-02-13T14:59:01.990-05:002011-02-13T14:59:01.990-05:00Very cool snippet and I really like that picture a...Very cool snippet and I really like that picture a lot too!Aprilhttp://csilibrarian.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-78078627396797336302011-02-13T14:41:54.900-05:002011-02-13T14:41:54.900-05:00Nice snippet! Are attention to detail in the dialo...Nice snippet! Are attention to detail in the dialogue.Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-77125205174062575642011-02-13T13:53:52.355-05:002011-02-13T13:53:52.355-05:00Powerful lines.Powerful lines.Chrystalla Thomahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17334487899923017045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-40471983695953104702011-02-13T13:26:35.583-05:002011-02-13T13:26:35.583-05:00Love how I can hear Teega speak through the phrasi...Love how I can hear Teega speak through the phrasing of the dialogue, and how she's drawn to the MC's misery.<br /><br />I love characters like this too, the ones who are neither good nor evil, but can, at times, play both roles. Especially when they walk a line so narrow the reader can't decide if they will help or hurt the hero and/or heroine.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-76693859714925485402011-02-13T13:00:57.255-05:002011-02-13T13:00:57.255-05:00Oh, I love characters like this. And a bit of magi...Oh, I love characters like this. And a bit of magic in the story.Marie Deeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02227521965829153174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-87206280135419553812011-02-13T12:58:18.213-05:002011-02-13T12:58:18.213-05:00Characters like that give me the shivers!Characters like that give me the shivers!Lex Valentinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04913165199017718669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-81739699687831795342011-02-13T11:56:09.481-05:002011-02-13T11:56:09.481-05:00OH, I really loved this. You gave her a great voi...OH, I really loved this. You gave her a great voiceJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-26115099183522507042011-02-13T11:22:29.522-05:002011-02-13T11:22:29.522-05:00I love how you write her voice! I could totally he...I love how you write her voice! I could totally hear her speaking.Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-41809915992054195872011-02-13T10:50:09.345-05:002011-02-13T10:50:09.345-05:00Fascinating. So many interesting character sketche...Fascinating. So many interesting character sketches.Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-57865053515718593472011-02-13T09:10:11.813-05:002011-02-13T09:10:11.813-05:00Ooh, intriguing. I love characters who are good an...Ooh, intriguing. I love characters who are good and evil, too.Sarah Grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03737049126767567901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-90998769037532425372011-02-13T06:29:36.582-05:002011-02-13T06:29:36.582-05:00Great writing Marsha!Great writing Marsha!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com