Sunday, February 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - February 27th

      Here’s six from my fantasy erotic romance book Tears on a Tranquil Lake. In this scene, my mermaid heroine, Ciel, has just been given a welcoming gift by her merman lover, Meris--a magical black pearl pendant.  

                 Its luster gleamed with green-violet iridescence against my skin.
            “It shines for you alone.” Gently pulling my hair out from under the cord and away from my breasts, his fingers passed over their upper curves. 
            I felt connected to him, with no apprehensions. I brushed aside remaining strands from my chest and lay back upon the sand, displaying my breasts to him with the black pearl resting between.
            Meris traced a finger down one side of the cord to the pearl.

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31 comments:

  1. Chrystalla ThomaFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:27 AM

    Such a calm atmosphere. Beautiful images.

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  2. Jessica E. SubjectFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    A wonderful excerpt leading up to (I'm sure) something big. I hope you'll share more of that scene next week.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    great snippet! So calm and beautiful.

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  4. Sarah GrimmFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:49 AM

    Love the snippet, Marsha! Will we get more next week? *wink*

    ~Sarah
    www.sarahgrimm.com

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  5. Ella DrakeFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:53 AM

    Leaves me wondering where that finger will go next.

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  6. Lisa FoxFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    A beautiful scene. Hopefully next week you'll give us a peek at what happens next!

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  7. ArleneFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Her tranquilty is shown so well. Love how connected she is to him.

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  8. Cate MastersFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    Evocative, and great imagery.

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  9. Sandra SookooFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    Nice and peaceful. Great job!

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    Oooo very interesting!! Great visuals!

    xx
    Angela
    http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

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  11. Viviane BrentanosFebruary 27, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    Tres sensuous

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  12. CasiFebruary 27, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    That was all tender and sexy. I want to read more now.

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  13. Laura KayeFebruary 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Such sensual imagery!

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  14. Elena GrayFebruary 27, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    It's amazing the image you can get from only six sentences!

    cbandy10(at)hotmail(dot)com

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  15. Rebecca RoyceFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    More please

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  16. The Scarf PrincessFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    So subtly sexy. I'm definitely intrigued to read more.

    joderjo402 AT gmail DOT com

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  17. L. A. GreenFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    Another great scene. Can't wait to read my copy. :)

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Sexy and vivid.

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  19. Lex ValentineFebruary 27, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    Nicely sensual!

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  20. D CarneyFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    Very tender scene.

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  21. Lauri J OwenFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:22 PM

    Sweet, tender, and sexy. Great six.

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  22. Cathy MFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    Great imagery, Marsha.

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  23. TrishFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    Loved the descriptions here. Great visuals.

    And Meris sounds like a keeper!

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  24. Seleste deLaney/Julie PartickaFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:18 PM

    Beautiful set-up, sexy yet serene. Very nice.

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  25. Christa PaigeFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:22 PM

    I want a jewel like that for myself, it sounds so neat.

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  26. Jayel KayeFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:43 PM

    That was beautifully written. The tension, the sensual feel.. I loved it all

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  27. Emily CaleFebruary 28, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    I love all the snippets from this story!

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  28. JFebruary 28, 2011 at 12:12 AM

    awesome build up to what will come!

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  29. JoAnne KenrickFebruary 28, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    beautiful scene and nice build up! Nice six xxx

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  30. Lucy FelthouseFebruary 28, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    Beautiful six :)

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  31. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    great six! very romantic!

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