tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post7401226565404636625..comments2024-03-05T02:19:34.846-05:00Comments on Marsha A. Moore: Romantic Friday Writers__Torn Between Two Lovers: Pirate Captain or MermanMarsha A. Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-60702984645266210892011-08-14T22:56:03.427-04:002011-08-14T22:56:03.427-04:00Very haunting. I can feel the panic and the very ...Very haunting. I can feel the panic and the very pressing dilemma!Ruth Madisonhttp://www.ruthmadison.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-31348250947405684422011-08-14T20:11:08.705-04:002011-08-14T20:11:08.705-04:00I'm somewhat alarmed over the situation of Noc...I'm somewhat alarmed over the situation of Noche and the 'wenches'. Overall, I'd say this piece caught my interest.Ms. Queenlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09941689050359457467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-86298511396298430192011-08-14T11:58:51.250-04:002011-08-14T11:58:51.250-04:00No fair... I want more! Lovely bit of writing
LxNo fair... I want more! Lovely bit of writing<br />LxLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-61878995230153272762011-08-13T05:49:41.702-04:002011-08-13T05:49:41.702-04:00I hope she clutches that black pearl tightly and i...I hope she clutches that black pearl tightly and indeed that its magic leads her to happiness. Cool characters.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-67072093722859791512011-08-12T17:37:59.744-04:002011-08-12T17:37:59.744-04:00Oh that is so mean, leaving me with all these ques...Oh that is so mean, leaving me with all these questions. I liked the foreshadowing and the mystery here.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-41950019018052479962011-08-12T15:17:47.902-04:002011-08-12T15:17:47.902-04:00Hi,
I truly feel her confusion of torn between tw...Hi,<br /><br />I truly feel her confusion of torn between two lovers, and that her sense of freedom is now endangered by rash passion. Whose hand, indeed? Oh yes, I'd love to know, and I'm guessing (pure speculation) the black pearl has worked some magic: her merman to the rescue! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-57311208534771662112011-08-12T14:36:46.740-04:002011-08-12T14:36:46.740-04:00I agree with Andy, I am also very curious whose ha...I agree with Andy, I am also very curious whose hand is on her shoulder.<br /><br />A story about a mermaid. Cool!<br />Even mermaids get the blues!<br /><br />Lovely text.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/08/confused-romantic-friday-writing.html%20" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFW No 14 - "Confused"</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4400387561406667550.post-28497368974759483792011-08-12T13:52:37.591-04:002011-08-12T13:52:37.591-04:00Hello.
What a dilemma indeed! Hmm...wonder whose h...Hello.<br />What a dilemma indeed! Hmm...wonder whose hand is on her shoulder?<br />Intriguing ending, Marsha.<br /><br />Nicely done!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.com